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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... ![]() |
Reflections, Again Is that me is that me is that really me? Wondering, remembering. Looking at twenty, thirty year old photographs. Touching the images family portrait, now asunder. My boys building mud fortifications... come running to greet my arrival. The sister-in-law that fell from grace with the perfect stranger. Yet, I remain the black sheep? Odd how perceptions persist, eh? Members who are gone or just about heartache for home, family. Dear mother who rejected pushed away to this foreign land. Not bitter, just sad, maybe lonely. Trace the family tree fingerprints in ancient book whose covers creek when opened. A treasure trove with a few tainted jewels. Time machine sometimes not welcome. Seems all the disappointment, all the failures, the crashed dreams are hiding inside that book. Along the most highly cherished the moments immortal, preserved building blocks of me... Is that me is that really me? Tramp Poet: |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm sorry your pictures bring back sad memories as well as good. Very well done. Joyce |
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RebeccaJoy Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 35 |
A treasure trove. This touch on memories, on pictures past, is wonderful. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
pictures are so telling, aren't they! Kathleen Blake |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thank you each for the imput! Appreciate the comments! Tramp Poet: |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It can be mind-boggling, can't it? Very well expressed, Daniel! |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I know this feeling so well. Whenever I look at old family pictures it is so hard to reconcile what I see in the picture with who I am today. Was I ever that young? That thin? That carefree? The questions go on and on. Betty Lou Hebert |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Wow, this is great, Modernist poetry...on the theme of alienation. Wonderful. *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ |
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