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Genesis - Haiku

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2001-05-24 08:17 PM

Genesis – Haiku

Embedded delight
Crafted gracefully perfect
Through which we see life

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2001-05-24 08:49 PM

oh, Ria, this is lovely! I feel that inner enthusiasm and am grateful for the gift of it! For through the eyes of inner joy all of life is a wonderment. Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-25 03:33 AM

Well done on this one! You did a wonderful job on it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

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ireland

3 posted 2001-05-25 02:35 PM

beautifully written, I am going to have to figure out Haikus some time.

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
as though they never exist"

nicky wire

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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4 posted 2001-05-26 08:51 AM

Very good, Gloria! I wish I could write these. At this point, I wish I could write anything!

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