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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-05-17 07:51 AM

Breeze through the garden
windchimes sing their melody
the flowers waltzing

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

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Mississippi coast

1 posted 2001-05-17 11:57 AM

Wonderful Spring impression. Flowers dancing to music.
Melton

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-05-17 02:19 PM

Very pretty Joyce

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

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Missouri

3 posted 2001-05-17 02:24 PM

A lovely bouquet of words.. I can see it in my minds eye.

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-17 02:44 PM

I really enjoyed this one. Very beautiful!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

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Presque Isle, ME

5 posted 2001-05-19 10:57 AM

Shades of Tchaikovsky!

This is a pretty image, Ellie. I had not thought of the wind chimes as the orchestra for the flowers' ballet.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Denise

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6 posted 2001-05-19 01:08 PM

Beautifully done, Ellie! You've painted a lovely picture in my mind!

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

7 posted 2001-05-19 01:20 PM

Excellent piece. Now everytime I hear the windchimes I will be watching the flowers dance.:-)

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Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

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Idaho, USA

8 posted 2001-05-20 03:48 PM

This captures a familiar scene. The flowers do look like they are dancing when breezes blow.

Betty Lou Hebert

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

9 posted 2001-05-25 01:23 PM

a delightful read...i love wind chimes and to relate them with flowers seems ingenious

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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10 posted 2001-05-26 01:23 PM

Loved it and you are so pretty!

I've never tried this form, perhaps some day I will!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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