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Hmm.. the mad ramblings of an overtired girl.. and butter.
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Hmm.. the mad ramblings of an overtired girl.. and butter. |
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Dionysus' Daughter New Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 7 |
Think of me very scientifically this kind of sucker-love so bittersweet Why is it that with all your charm and your vices you think of me when you close your eyes? You are the utopian dream that I can't fathom completely but I try oh, I try feeling the weight of your soul loving mine. Strawberry wine and deep blue kisses Your voice, the ring of your laughter flies to me on gossamer wings It might have been a while since you've been loved like you should be loved.... People like us are meant to go around in pairs... the staccato of our steps falling upon no man's ear In tender loving arms might be something you miss... There's something in your eyes that cannot be disguised... don't tell me it ain't there. [This message has been edited by Dionysus' Daughter (01-14-2002 10:59 PM).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Dionysus Daughter, "There's something in your eyes that cannot be disguised"......let's hope you don't give up on that look and what it means. Welcome to these great blue pages. ME |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Welcome to the pub..a very nice first post. hope to see more of your work. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Dionysus' Daughter New Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 7 |
ME- Thank you very much... I fully intend to keep staring right into those eyes and never lose sight of them. *Smile* Pegasus- Thank you! Hopefully I can find the time to post more on here... I'd also like to thank you both for such a warm welcome to the community as well... Solstice Son is the one to thank for bringing me here. *grin* |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* smiles * yup...tis my fault..all me...every bit of it..I get ALL the credi..I mean blame..yup *LOL* welcome m'dear...I'm sure you'll dazzle as always  Sol " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Welcome! This is a delicious poem of unconditional love...the only kind that counts! More, more.. Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Pretty good for "rambling"... Nice poetry writing with lots of feeling. Deb |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
E=mc2, scientifically speaking that is there is another called entropy that is that unless you add energy, everything goes from hot to cold. I liked your poem, and this is from the biggest sucker of them all. take care and God bless |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Poetically speaking, welcome and I love this. It sounded as if you were speaking it directly, and that's a nice feeling when reading a poem. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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