Corner Pub #2 |
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Sky Jewels |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas ![]() |
Rain drips off the leaves and the sun's rays slice threw the black clouds. Raindrops, like tiny jewels, sparkle in a spider's web. The old cracked gate quietly squeaks in the gentle breeze. I walk with noiseless feet, the sweet aroma of the damp soil drifts up to my nostrils. This is, of course as you can see, unfinished. ![]() |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Greeneyes, it may be unfinished, but it says alot. And it is said beautifully. ME |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You've set a good descriptive stage. I'm waiting to see where it leads. Joyce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome back Greeneyes! You have a beautiful beginning going here! Can't wait to read it when it's finished! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I would love to read more of this, it has some great images! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Me too..... Best |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I agree with the others. A fine start. the beauty of it is that you can take it anywhere you want from here. It might be interesting for you to do several different versions using the same introduction. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
wow...all I can say is encore! Please finish, this is outstanding. Deb |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Thank you for all your encouraging words. Things have been crazy so I haven't been able to work on this poem, let alone post other..Well once again..thanks. |
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