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allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2001-11-17 07:53 PM

gathered by night three friends

touched by long sight and open

by fields not seen midnight black

touch bodies warm and willing

no brutal empty mannered hand

no cough of embarassed wince

a touch of madness of nights sweet wisdom

sinks in living true friends to kiss

notarose
Junior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 21

1 posted 2001-11-20 07:31 PM

your ending made me smile *s I liked

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2001-12-16 11:41 AM

Darkness and night don't always create fears, some of them it erases. Very uniquely written...I enjoyed.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

3 posted 2001-12-17 01:27 PM

A strange and feyish picture you paint here, perhaps that is why it appeals to me, as it touches the feyness that resides in me.

-wordancer

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

4 posted 2001-12-20 10:01 AM

Very unique. I played a bit
with the wording, stringing
them into one long line,
breaking them up [it can be
done, you know] and it kept
taking on new meaning...so
it's something that I will come
back to read again...

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

5 posted 2001-12-24 03:05 PM

Hello - I just looked in and didn't expect any comments here. Thank you all for your kind words.

Allan *)

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