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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind ![]() |
Thank you so much for your reponses to my last post! Before I thank you each of you, please allow me to sing a morning poem to you. I hope you all would like to be my new friends. In a day bright as morning star, a blue bird sings in front of a snail house, 'Last summer in a beautiful day, A snail came up to me, "Don't cry my dear, Though I know not what else to do." Those were you words And I still remembered at heart; Indeed they were a few But some simple words. The different was you care to say When some other would rather not. Sometimes it's just a slightly touch, It touches the heart of us. I came to thank you; Though when I've broken my leg You've only given me those words, They means more than gold.' 'Who wouldn't have done so, You need not to thank me.' 'However it may seem small to you, It makes a different in my life.' 'Let's forget about the past and now rejoice our morning.' 'You're indeed a deserved friend of mine.' //So what do you think about this poem? Marge Tindal: Thank you. I'm flattered by your saying my words were charming. Cause though I write I do not think I write well. Indeed I was told I write terrible and my grammer horrify me. Martie: Thank you for saying that I'm lovely=) Vicky: Thanks. I'm glad you like the poem. Maybe this one is better than the others I've written. dgvarner: Thank you! Such a comfort! Dee: Thanks for such a compliment! Charisma: Thank you. I feel better now. Regina: Thanks for loving my work. ellie LeJeune: I didn't know my words would touch someone heart. Thanks for saying I'm a gift poet. Seymour Tabin: Thank you. Deb: Thanks for your wishes! Nancy: Hugs. Thanks for saying that I'm talent. SEA: Thank you so much! I will write to you when I'm feeling I need a talk=) Of all poem I post this poem I got most compliments and responses! PEOPLE AT PASSION ARE TOO LOVELY TO CRITIC! Love, Lizzy Vivian http://members.shaw.ca/home0/ ~A little sour add to taste of life. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
of course I want to be your friend, I hope you'll accept me as yours ![]() This poem is beautiful! I am keeping this in my library! email me anytime!! ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Passionate people protecting all personas publicly private yep...that's what we do... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vivian~ You little sweetheart~ ![]() What a lovely, lovely friend you will be~ The great circle of Passion's friends welcomes you with open arms~ AND we all have room for improvement ... and we'll get there TOGETHER, okay ? I'm gone for this weekend ... but I'll be back with a *hug* and a *smile*~ 'However it may seem small to you, It makes a different in my life.' Such a lovely, lovely thought, isn't it ? *HUGS* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And becaus you love people, people love you. Your poems are lovely. Joyce |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I sincerely hope to be your friend and grow with you here at Passions. Your poetry is lovely and gifted with heart! So glad you are here! ![]() Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful thoughts, Aries! |
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