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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-12 01:21 AM

When Winter Comes by Vivian So

Though the spring rejoices in the flower’s beauty,
How often does she think of her old friend?
The easy wind wept away her sorrow,
Yet she whispers counting her faults.
And although she isn’t the prettiest,
The bees never mind her defect.
Somehow she isn’t content,
And when the winter morning comes,
She finds her regret comes to late.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2001-11-12 06:38 AM

Lizzy, this is lovely and very beautifully written....Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2001-11-12 07:47 AM

I really like this, very well written.. check out the last line tho..to should be too. An easy mistake to make.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2001-11-12 01:38 PM

Lizzie Vivian: This is a lovely poem and shows great perception.

Betty Lou Hebert

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2001-11-12 04:23 PM

thank you for all the compliments!
=) I hope some day I can write a poem grammerically and spelling prefect! Lots of my poems have defects.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-11-16 12:15 PM

Vivian~
This is just soooooooo lovely~
You have a beautiful talent blossoming~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-11-16 01:04 AM

Vivian-
   This is lovely.
   I'm really enjoying reading your poetry.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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