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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
The way the wnd blows through her hair the searing fire in her stare the way the ice can coat her voice I feel I have no choice and still i feel damned like a broken hungry man though I know its not a sin still, I'm giving in living through the pain of her never ending reign the way her voice can cut like glass birdies silent f she should pass the way she smiles amidst the storm i should have been warned and still i feel damned like a broken hungry man though I know its not a sin still, I'm giving in living through the pain of her never ending reign now I'm old before my time nothing left but rhymes though I know i've been betrayed to her I stay chained and still i feel damned like a broken hungry man though I know its not a sin still, I'm giving in living through the pain of her never ending reign ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
You sound as if your in a tough relationship I may be wrong but I hope everything for you is ok. A sad write but very poetic. I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
if I were a few (smile) years younger..oh my! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Miss Moondust (( couldn't resist *G* )) Yes.....yes I am...poetry...is a healthy form of self therapy... Lady~~~ first off...age is relative  ...secondly....that's an old picture...and thirdly I think I just need a rest...but thankyou ...truely Sol ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Poor Sol! If I can steal a line from one of my all time favorite movies "Legend of the Fall" (and actors, Mr. Anthony Hopkins), 'You are not *pause* damned! I will not allow that...' I know you're going through a really rough patch, but, I guess that's why we're writers--we know how to express our pain very well! Take care Mr. Sol!  ~~Jamie "There's something wrong with the world today..." --Aerosmith, Living on the Edge [This message has been edited by Wikket (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Wikket darlin....for the record....this was the way i remembered a bit of music I worked up while workin *L* I know it fits my current sit all too well...but it actually made me happy writing this...its odd...ahh but then what would we expect from the guy that writes an entire series on a sasquatch??? Sol ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You are a poet and have a right to write on any subject, but we all inclined to think you are writing in torment when it is only an artistic expression. Keep up the good work. Joyce |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Joyce... Hm...its odd but a bit of both....must be why people think that artistic types are crazy...finding joy in putting torment into words and pictures beyond their source..Thanks Sol |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
A very descriptive and expressive write! Good job. Betty Lou Hebert |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i hope your torment now is just a minor obstacle and that things do change for the better... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great expression, Sol. Well done! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Fantastic poem Sol. You express your pain and grief wonderfully. I feel as if I was you, at one point or another. To me, that is the best poetry. Where I become the poet. Dammed is tiptop. Sincerely, Titus "Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Trill , Fate, Denise, THanks you very much...for the comments compliments and for reading my stuff...Poetryislife...thank you as well for the far to grand compliment Sol ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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