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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2006-03-28 04:31 PM


The Blizzard

Mama was just saying, "I guess
the forecaster was wrong,"
when the storm struck.
It came from a clear blue sky.
The sun had shone on one
of those false spring days
that sometimes come in March
on the North Dakota prairies.

Spring was abolished instantly.
The Arctic wind picked up snow,
hurling it at anything in
its pathway, and though
we were safely home, we
were worried about those who
were shopping and had lingered
over coffee in the cafe.

We knew that my brother
and his wife and two small children
were among these stragglers.
There was no way we could check
on their safety.
The phones were out with
that first strong blast.

Daddy tied himself to a long rope
to get to the coal pile in the shed.
We were safe but worried about others.
It would be two days before
phones were restored,
roads cleared and news came
that my brother and family
were safe.

Others were not so fortunate.
Some died in their cars.
Those who left their cars,
perished anyway.

My last big storm.
I married and moved away
that summer.

By: Joyce 3/28/06

© Copyright 2006 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2006-03-28 08:53 PM


I don't blame you!

Nicely done, Joyce. Do you write in free verse very often? I don't recall seeing this from you before. It seemed to fit the subject matter, though. Good work!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2006-03-28 09:24 PM


Thanks Sky.  No I don't write in free verse very often.  I am not sure I know the rules.  love, Joyce
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3 posted 2006-03-28 09:30 PM


As far as I know, free verse just means no structure--no meter or anything. Poetic techniques still fit into it, though. I think you followed the rules just fine!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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4 posted 2006-03-29 05:44 AM


an interesting look into the stark reality of the winter in the Dakotas. nicely done Joyce

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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5 posted 2006-03-29 10:18 PM


Dear Joyce:  Interesting and sad story and quite a departure from your usual style.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Klassy Lassy
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6 posted 2006-04-05 01:39 AM


Joyce, you free verse is very effective and I found myself drawn into the harshness of the prairie winter, and feeling trepidation at the plight of people caught out in it.  

It makes me very grateful for the mild weather summer and winter where I live.  I'm glad you no longer are in the midst of it, either.
~ Klassy


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7 posted 2006-06-14 05:17 PM


I love your story poems,I envy you this ability. Enjoyd, martyjo
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