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0 posted 2006-02-08 09:55 PM






Sojourn By the Sea

If I could live where're I please,
My name would ride the ocean breeze.
My footprints show on every beach,
Just beyond the wild waves reach.
The tides would bring their gifts to me
And leave them on the sand, to see.
A piece of sea-glass, worn and old,
I'd treasure like a piece of gold.

The driftwood and the flotsam shown,
Hold sea stories all their own.
I love the flowered hills of June.
The rising of September's moon.
The winter storms, such awesome sights.
The hush of surf, on peaceful nights.
The convoluted shapes of shells.
The call of foghorns and ship's bells.

Each speaks to me in different ways.
And adds their magic to my days.
If I could hear the breakers roar
Each time I step outside my door
And smell the cool and briny air,
I'd be content to sojourn there
And count each day beside the sea
A blessing God had given me!



Betty Lou Hebert


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1 posted 2006-02-08 11:01 PM


This is lovely.  I have never felt the lure of the sea.  But I know you do.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2006-02-09 12:16 PM


Very nice. You have many who share your feelings. martyjo
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3 posted 2006-02-09 06:28 AM


Hi Betty,

If I could live where're I please,
My name would ride the ocean breeze.

what a great opening! I love it and every word that follows after!

Love,
MiCheLLe

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4 posted 2006-02-09 07:17 AM


Can really feel your love for the sea from this poem. FNG
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5 posted 2006-02-09 05:57 PM


Dear Joyce: You're right, I do love the sea and everything in it! Well maybe not EVERYTHING!!

Love
Betty Lou

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6 posted 2006-02-09 05:58 PM


martyjo:  Thanks for commenting and living in Florida, I imagine you have lots of beach time?

Betty Lou

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7 posted 2006-02-09 05:59 PM


MiCheLLe:  Always nice to hear from you. Thanks for commenting.

Love
Betty Lou

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8 posted 2006-02-09 06:00 PM


FNG:  I spent a lot of time on the ocean in my younger days and I guess the spell never dies!

Betty Lou

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9 posted 2006-02-10 03:25 AM


Beautiful!
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10 posted 2006-02-10 12:30 PM


BettyLou~
Your words float as a gentle wave ...~
This is so pretty~

HI RONNIE~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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11 posted 2006-02-10 03:09 PM


Kathy:  Thank you!  I see you are a new member, so welcome to the site!  Hope you will enjoy it and all the friendly people you'll find here!

Betty Lou

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12 posted 2006-02-10 03:10 PM


Dear Marge;  Thanks for reading!  I always love hearing from you.

Ronnie says "hi" back!

Love
Betty Lou

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13 posted 2006-03-03 03:18 AM


Dear Betty Lou

You really bring nature to life with your poetry!!!  This poem of yours is wonderful as are all your poems!!!

Love Verbena xo


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14 posted 2006-03-03 02:48 PM


Dear Verbena:  Thank you for reading and your comments are always much appreciated!

Love
Betty Lou

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