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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Under the Midnight Moon Under the midnight moon I stand. A stranger in a foreign land. I ponder on what brought me here Away from all that I hold dear. The radiance that floods around, Draws eerie mist, from out the ground, To drift and twine about the trees And float like smoke, around my knees. I stare at it and know that I Am drifting too, but don't see why My life has taken such a turn. In looking back, what did I learn? Whatever lessons I might find, Seem to elude my questing mind. Perhaps an answer will come soon While gazing at the midnight moon! It is so beautiful, serene. The brightest moon I've ever seen. It quite entrances me to stay Another hour, another day! And will I in some distant year, Discover why I linger here, Or am I steeped in mystery Just like this midnight moon I see? Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is so beautiful. I just can't wait to open your writings. Love, Joyce |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
What a delightful read, sweet and mystical! I've always been a fan of the moon, a real luna-tic! nice work! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: Thank you for such a nice compliment! I always enjoy your writings too! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Dennis: Thanks for reading! It was nice to hear from you. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ You know my adore of the moon ... so just saying thank you~ Beautiful penning dear friend~ It's contagious ... I hope~ *Huglets*  ~Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Betty, I can identify with these feelings, and I feel the sincerity in your writing lovely sentiments, thanks for sharing!Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I had a feeling you might like this one! I know how you adore the moon and the super poetry you write about it! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
MiCheLLe: Thank you for your nice comments! Nice to hear from you today! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
A VERY NICE POEM, THAT I ENJOYED MUCH,....PAUL shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely stunning without a graphic! You know what this reminded me of? Monday night The Bachelor In Paris began on t.v. and my daughter-in-love and I were watching it, as the bachelor pointed out that they were standing under a full moon, not knowing what his fate would be.  Great job!"There's nothing worse that being an aging young person!" - Richard Pryor |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Paul: Thank you for letting me know that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate hearing from you! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Mysteria: Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this. I enjoyed hearing from you! It's been awhile! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a treat to read, as your posts always are, Betty. I awoke at 3:30 AM the other night, peered out our big dining room window to the west, and there hung the moon, huge, gold and round, so low. It was just beautiful and I was captivated, too. God bless Rae |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Rae: Thank you for your nice comments! It's a treat to hear from you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
""Or am I steeped in mystery Just like this midnight moon I see?"" I love that Simple yet so eloquent |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
longte; Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Jim Nasium Junior Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 32Philadelphia Pa USA |
Very nice work Betty Lou Hebert I enjoyed reading your poem... Jim Nasium |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Hi Jim: I have just been reading your poems! Now I find you have been here reading mine! Glad you liked it! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Enjoyed the read. I too, find the full moon soothing and serene. Thanks, Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: Thanks! I appreciate your commenting. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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IntoTheRain Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 51Westwood, CA |
excellent.. parts of it were just so cool.. perhaps because im such a big fan of imagery.. well done |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
IntoTheRain: Thank you for reading this poem and commenting on it. Welcome to PIP! We always enjoy having new members join us here. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Betty Lou This is beautiful versing and it has given me goosebumps! Love Verbena xo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Verbena: Thank you for commenting and so glad you enjoyed this! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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