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0 posted 2006-01-23 11:13 PM







Wild Horse

My uncle used to make "home brew."
He always had a barrel or two,
Made out of oak and he would say
He made the finest brew that way.
One time, he hauled an empty out
Into the field and set about
To fill it to the very brink
With water for his horse to drink.

Next day, when we sat down to eat
And all complained about the heat,
We heard a whinny, strange and wild.
My uncle's horse, so tame and mild,
Was running madly here and there,
With rolling eyes and flying hair.
He bucked and jumped and shook his head.
It looked as though he might have fed
On loco weed, but we soon found
The reason he was dashing round.
He drank a half a barrel and he
Was just as drunk as he could be!


Published In Rocky Mountain Rider Magazine, 2002


Betty Lou Hebert


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1 posted 2006-01-24 12:30 PM


BettyLou~
*giggles* at this poetic tale~

Back in the days when my used-to-be and I owned thorougbred racing horses ... at the Calder Racing Course in Miami, FL, there was a 12 year old horse that just kept plodding along winning races~
A feature story was done on the horse and his owner said that the horse was a real beer drinker, who downed his beer with ease !!!

This reminded me of that story~

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2 posted 2006-01-24 10:25 AM


This is so amusing Betty.  Poor horse.  Love, joyce
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3 posted 2006-01-24 01:25 PM


Dear Marge:  My uncle's horse took awhile to recover from his binge. Needless to say, the drinking barrel was changed for a new one!

I guess there are some horses who do have a taste for beer!  Of course, someone has to give it to them to being with! Probably not a good idea for a race horse!

Love
Betty Lou

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4 posted 2006-01-24 01:27 PM


Dear Joyce: The horse recovered very well, but it took him a few hours. He got a new drinking barrel right away! Thanks.

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2006-02-09 06:55 AM


Amusing and entertaining. Only knew about sad poetry. This is new to me.
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6 posted 2006-02-09 06:05 PM


FNG:  I love to write humorous poetry, as well as other types. Try it!

Betty Lou

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7 posted 2006-02-10 03:29 AM


WoW...I like this...you make writing visual!

Kathy

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8 posted 2006-02-10 06:01 PM


Kathy:  What a nice compliment!  Thanks for reading!

Betty Lou

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9 posted 2006-02-11 10:49 AM


Hi Betty,

hahah that was so entertaining! I just watched Shrek earlier in the evening and your animated poem reminds me of the donkey hehe

Love,
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10 posted 2006-02-11 09:30 PM


MicheLle:  It was pretty funny at the time this happened, although I doubt if the horse thought so!! Thanks.

Love
Betty Lou

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11 posted 2006-03-03 03:11 AM


Dear Betty Lou

I found this poem very humourous but I too doubt if that horse thought it was funny at the time!  I wonder if it had a 'hang over'!  Eh! Eh!  Many years back my sister had a boyfriend who had a horse and it smoked cigarettes!  It is hard to believe but I was there too witness it!  Of course, the cigarette had to be lit and put in the horses mouth but as God's witness that horse did 'draw' on that cigarette!

Love Verbena xo


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12 posted 2006-03-03 02:50 PM


Dear Verbena:  I'm not sure how that horse felt the day afer his binge!  When he quit neighing and jumping around, we assumed he was over it all!
Wow!  A cigarette smoking horse! That was something to see!

Love
Betty Lou

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