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amepoesie
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0 posted 2006-01-25 03:22 PM


Bliss?

Inside man’s heart, love is real.
Jostled, shaken, and timid
Like the breeze, we exhibit
Pain. Whence comes our agony?
Bliss moves in a mysterious way.

Ame et Poésie

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1 posted 2006-01-26 09:40 AM


Ame~
Lovely ... the form is different for sure~
ABC ...
Might be a great idea to put the explanation here for others~

*Huglets*
*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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midnightblues
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2 posted 2006-01-26 09:45 AM


Wow I like this!
Your style is refreshing do hope to see more of your works!

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

amepoesie
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3 posted 2006-01-26 11:59 AM


Thanks you guys! I am glad you like it!

ABC poem
An ABC poem has 5 lines that create a mood, picture, or feeling. Lines 1 through 4 are made up of words, phrases or clauses - and the first word of each line is in alphabetical order from the first word. Line 5 is one sentence, beginning with any letter.

Ame et Poésie

amepoesie
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4 posted 2006-01-26 10:12 PM


Michelle, thank you very much for your nice message!!!

Ame et Poésie

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