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junemac
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0 posted 2006-01-15 02:43 PM



The sky - a film of white upon shadow
hovering sadly over darkened landscape.
We travel amud clogged roadside
edged by winters naked skinny hedges.
Fields heavy with yesterdays rain
puddle morosely like tear-soaked tissue.
A group of blackened trees huddle darkly,
spread, spindly fingers scratching the skyline.
A freckling of birds dip and climb,
like flecks of soot in the rising mist.
A mood engulfs us upon this journey
like a a melancholyblanket from above.
As if the sun has forgotten us here,
and the day dipped its brush in night.

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1 posted 2006-01-15 04:35 PM


This sounds like you were describing a wintry day in Washington state.  Quite eloquently, I might add.  Thanks.  Joyce
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2 posted 2006-01-15 11:00 PM


junemac: Sounds as if you are experiencing some of the dark days we are having here!!
Very descriptive. There is sunshine somewhere!!

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Jim Nasium
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3 posted 2006-01-17 06:58 AM



junemac

Very nice work! I enjoyed reading this one'a yous. I am going to search the board to see if I can find more of your work; I want to read more.
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junemac
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4 posted 2006-01-19 05:13 PM


Thank you all for your kind words. I enjoyed writing this one.
Hugs from June xxxx

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