Corner Pub #2 |
Blind Justice |
Jim Nasium Junior Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 32Philadelphia Pa USA |
Please note the word play in this one.... Once upon a time in a small town not too far away from YOU a young man was fasly accused of a crime he didn't commit; Blind Justice by Jim Nasium The tailor brought a class action suit when the baker said he kneaded the dough they called in a farmer out standing in his field and a traveler who wanted some place to go the fisherman wasn't the only one who went to sea a candle maker was standing there in the light the doctor, the lawyer and street walker were also there to share that night No one ever thought it'd go this far after all it was all based on hear say the farmer couldn't produce evidence not even up until this day but never the less it only takes one rotten apple to spoil the bunch I thought it was wrong but what could I do all I really had was a hunch I watched as they took him off to jail another young man falsely accused she sat there with a smile on her face every one knew she enjoyed being used the judge said "this case is closed" I sat there quietly on my hands it was another case of blind justice I'll never understand... ©2001 Jim Nasium My Art: http://www.gymart.com |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Word play indeed. Very, very clever. Loved it. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Jim: Masterfully written! I enjoyed it very much! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Jim Nasium Junior Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 32Philadelphia Pa USA |
re: Dear Jim: Masterfully written! I enjoyed it very much! Betty Lou Thank you for your kind words about my work... Jim Nasium My Art: http://www.gymart.com |
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Jim Nasium Junior Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 32Philadelphia Pa USA |
Word play indeed. Very, very clever. Loved it. Joyce Thank you! That's so very nice'a you to say... Jim Nasium My Art: http://www.gymart.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ M |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Clever word play. Your writings are fun and enjoyable, Bring more like these and you will bring many a smile. Enjoyed !! Hugs June xxx |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hello Jim, This is witty, wish I could write like you do Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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