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0 posted 2006-01-17 02:38 PM






Winter At My Window

When autumn winds bring coolish air
And colored leaves fly everywhere,
There is a lonliness I find,
To watch this season fall behind
Relentless passage of the days,
That bring swift changes, as I gaze.
My window and the yard beyond,
Reveal no birds upon the pond.
The crickets now have ceased to sing.
Most any day the cold will bring
The first snow of the winter season,
Giving me an urgent reason
To don my boots and coat and hat
And walk into the forest that
Holds the secrets of the day.
I watch the shadows as they play
Deeper down the narrow trails,
Until the daylight slowly fails
And as I turn towards home, I see
The last leaves fall, from every tree
And in the morning, winter will
Be sitting on my windowsill!



Betty Lou Hebert


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1 posted 2006-01-17 05:34 PM


This lovley and a little sad.  Well done as always.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2006-01-17 11:11 PM


Dear Joyce:  Thanks.  It is a little sad for me to see autumn change to winter, although I didn't intend for that feeling to creep into this write!

Love
Betty Lou

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3 posted 2006-01-19 05:22 PM


A beautiful gem of a poem dear friend. I really enjoyed this dance with nature.
Hugs from June xxx

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4 posted 2006-01-19 11:09 PM


Dear June:  Thanks for such nice remarks!

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2006-01-20 11:21 AM


Dear Betty,

Beautiful poem, I love the way it rhymes too! thanks for sharing

Love
MiCheLLe

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6 posted 2006-01-20 02:34 PM


Dear MiCheLLe:  Thank you!  Winter is still at my window here!

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2006-03-03 04:29 AM


Dear Betty Lou

A wonderful poem of yours about the transition from Autumn to Winter!  However, I felt a hint of sadness there and that sadness washed over me!  I really felt like crying!

Love Verbena xo


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8 posted 2006-03-03 05:13 AM


Loved this. No sadness crept into my heart. As I loved the walk in the forest and seeing the gentle flakes of snow making warm blankets to protect the growth until Spring arrives. best to you, martyjo
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9 posted 2006-03-03 02:43 PM


Verbena:  There is a certain sadness.......at least for me........in seeing the advent of winter, so I can understand your reaction! Thanks!

Love
Betty Lou

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10 posted 2006-03-03 02:44 PM


martyjo:  I'm glad you liked this! Thanks.
Autumn is my favorite season of the year.

Betty Lou

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