Corner Pub #2 |
Winter At My Window |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Winter At My Window When autumn winds bring coolish air And colored leaves fly everywhere, There is a lonliness I find, To watch this season fall behind Relentless passage of the days, That bring swift changes, as I gaze. My window and the yard beyond, Reveal no birds upon the pond. The crickets now have ceased to sing. Most any day the cold will bring The first snow of the winter season, Giving me an urgent reason To don my boots and coat and hat And walk into the forest that Holds the secrets of the day. I watch the shadows as they play Deeper down the narrow trails, Until the daylight slowly fails And as I turn towards home, I see The last leaves fall, from every tree And in the morning, winter will Be sitting on my windowsill! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This lovley and a little sad. Well done as always. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: Thanks. It is a little sad for me to see autumn change to winter, although I didn't intend for that feeling to creep into this write! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
A beautiful gem of a poem dear friend. I really enjoyed this dance with nature. Hugs from June xxx |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear June: Thanks for such nice remarks! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Betty, Beautiful poem, I love the way it rhymes too! thanks for sharing Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear MiCheLLe: Thank you! Winter is still at my window here! Love Betty Lou |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Betty Lou A wonderful poem of yours about the transition from Autumn to Winter! However, I felt a hint of sadness there and that sadness washed over me! I really felt like crying! Love Verbena xo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Loved this. No sadness crept into my heart. As I loved the walk in the forest and seeing the gentle flakes of snow making warm blankets to protect the growth until Spring arrives. best to you, martyjo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Verbena: There is a certain sadness.......at least for me........in seeing the advent of winter, so I can understand your reaction! Thanks! Love Betty Lou |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
martyjo: I'm glad you liked this! Thanks. Autumn is my favorite season of the year. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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