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0 posted 2006-01-01 09:53 PM







The Land Beneath the Lake

Beneath the reservoir's calm face,
There lies a silent, haunted place.
A village, drowned long years before.
Now fish swim out each open door
And when conditions are just right,
If you go rowing out, you might,
Still see the houses, when you peer
Into the depths so green and clear!

It gives a feeling very strange
To see how people could arrange
Every road, each house and tree,
Not ever dreaming they would be
A forfeit to a dam to make
This resevoir, this placid lake
And as I hover overhead
I wonder what these people said
When they were told about their fate?
What feelings did this news create?

I know how I would feel if I
Were forced to leave my home nearby.
They also must have much enjoyed
These hills and woods. I can't avoid
A guilty feeling when I see
Their sacrifice, so folks like me
Can row and fish and watch the loons.
Listening to their yodeling tunes.
Perhaps they voice an elegy
For all the dreams not meant to be!


Betty Lou Hebert


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Annie78
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1 posted 2006-01-01 11:36 PM


WOW what a picture you have penned here....I really like this.
Annie

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2 posted 2006-01-02 02:47 AM


Dear Betty   What a thoughtful empathetic writing.  I enjoyed it very much.  Joyce
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Annie:  Thanks!  I was visiting a resevoir near us, several years ago, and the sight of the drowned village, has stayed with me!

Love
Betty Lou

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4 posted 2006-01-02 01:57 PM


Dear Joyce:  Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it! Happy New Year to you!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2006-02-28 10:25 PM


THIS FABULOUS WRITE REMINDS ME OF WHEN THE CITY TOOK OUR HOME FOR A FREEWAY THEN NEGLECTED TO BUILD IT FOR 15 YEARS!!!!

IT HITS HOME BUT MAINLY, IT IS JUST WONDER--FULL.  IT ALSO MADE ME THINK OF THE TITANIC.  KUDOS DARLIN'... MUCHO KUDOS.


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6 posted 2006-03-01 06:39 AM


Dear Betty Lou

It is sad when people have to leave their homes to make way for the sake of 'progress', so to speak!

This is a wonderful poem that showed a lot of empathy for these people who lost their homes to make way for that dam!

Love Verbena xo


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7 posted 2006-03-01 04:39 PM


MUSEconnieHUES:  THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENTS. I'M VERY SORRY TO HEAR THAT YOUR PROPERTY WAS CONFISCATED AND THEN NOT USED FOR 15 YEARS!  ONE HEARS OF THIS HAPPENING FAR TOO OFTEN.

I'M GLAD YOU ENJOYED THE POEM. THIS LITTLE TOWN WAS SUBMERGED BY A DAM THAT WAS BUILT.
THE PEOPLE WERE ALL RE-LOCATED, BUT THEY STILL MISSED THEIR ORIGINAL SITE.

TRILLIUM

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2006-03-01 04:41 PM


Dear Verbena:  Yes, I thought it was a sad event too.  It was quite eerie to be able to row over it in a boat and see the submerged town below, when the conditions were right.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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