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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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My love for you is not a common sort, I give it freely as a lover ought, it stands alone against a troubled time, above the tangled mass of worldly grime, not blackest night with cold invasive chill, can change the mind of this determined will, the way is fraught with snares of darkest brew, released to block the path I take to you, no trap, no scheme, nor bond can stem this tide, nor sinful act of dark intent deride, this way though strewn with obstacles enmass, and whisperings of foulest kind quite crass, is mine to travel with determined stride, that in your loving arms I might abide. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A nice strong true love poem. I enjoyed reading it. Joyce |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
The world needs those with determined love to travel the difficult roads. Those that often lead to someone who not only needs to be reached, but perhaps makes the journey very worthwhile. I like this one. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
nice love poem. Strong description of love. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
...and love waits through at the end of the journay...lovely, lovely poem my friend. WO |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I like it. Be gone with the world. Straight forward. Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very romantic and I enjoyed reading it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
You write these so well  Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I do enjoy the way you pen your phrases....they are delightful! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I agree; love is a superior motivation. I enjoyed your words. ~ Karen ~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear pegasus, Mine too Thanks for sharing, I love this. Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nice to see this lovely sonnet come back to life. Love, Joyce |
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