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0 posted 2005-08-27 02:51 AM


Simple Wish. I am Too Naive.

Behind the curtains, I just want to observe your shadow,
Yet even this wishful thought is being diminished by a dashing light.
I never thought, even as an observer, I would caused you pain.
I know I shall have just disappear, yet tonight my heart sore like thorns.

How could I describe my feelings more...

If I could dream, I dream I am your glasses.
Quietly observe all things surround you.
I don't need you to notice me, I don't need to have you.
I just want to be someone that can cheer you up.

Thousand of things, I know you wouldn't have told me.
Thousand of things, you think we are incompatible.
I don't denied, I am not mature enough for your taste.
I don't denied, we are of different world.

Yet all I hope, all I hope, is to be a star at your yard.
Silently stood by you, quietly observe you.
I don't need you to look up at me, or remember me.
I just want to be a star at your yard, a silent corner of your life.

(c)Aug 26, 2005
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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1 posted 2005-09-01 01:03 PM


ElizaDear~
Such a wistfully sad piece ... trust that your heart will find just the right wish that comes true~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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