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junemac
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0 posted 2005-08-28 04:36 PM





Unfettered, I wander free,
treading blue-prints of life.
A spaghetti tangle of experience,
of words emotion and senses.
Concious-free I dip and dive,
in curious blend's of memory.
Digging deeper into darkness;
wallowing in pity puddles,
and bathing in flesh pleasure.
I can utter the unsaid,
converse with the un-dead.
Materialize to taste and feel,
or vanish things instead.
All within the dreams I dream;
when my conscience rests,
and my soul is free.

© Copyright 2005 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-08-28 07:07 PM


June~
Lots of lovely thoughts to ponder in this penning~

Always good to see you sweets~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2005-08-28 09:53 PM


I wandered with you through the lines of your poem.  What a trip.  Spaghetti tangle of emotions.  How well said.   Good to see you here again.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2005-08-30 05:11 PM


Enjoyed this poem June. Some really creative phraseology!

Love
Betty Lou

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