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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Just thought it might be time to drop another Saga type poem in here It has some open meanings And several hidden ones Great fun to write Hope you enjoy it It takes a few minutes The Legend of the Chrystal Flame I’m the only one who knows, so its me you ask You come to me to seek the truth, it seems a simple task Are you sure you want the truth, ‘cause truth can have an ugly face No.. You don’t want the truth, for here, in truth, it has no place Believe the truths of legend; they are as true as truth can be All else that I’d tell you, would show our human frailty Legend of their perfect love, brings hope and burns a Chrystal Flame The shifting masks of memory, ensure that only love remains You think that I’m a simpleton, who’d betray his friends Be gone you fools, don’t you see, tis here the story ends And the Years Pass …… Now the years are growing short, I have a tale to tell Fools are gone, we’re alone, remember this part well So many times I’ve said this, when all is said and done Come with me to other times, when we all were young Perfect is my memory, of the Chrystal Flame Legend of the lovers, whose story gave its name How they blazed a trail of love, wide across the world It all began so simply, with a lonely boy and girl Of course there was a castle, of course there was king War and siege and pestilence, and many other things But they are only part, of the story you will hear My voice is weak, I am old, closer drag your chair …… Look around and see the world, how happily you play But once the world was not like this, in those far off days Let others speak of Dragons, and supernatural force They are a part of legend; cannot be true of course You know me well, as the old man, lives up on the hill No one alive still knows me, but very soon you will Go over to the corner; drag out that old chest Memories are buried there; in a mouldy nest My harp lies there disconsolate; too many broken strings Find the gut; then tune it up; once more I will sing Over there now; on the shelf; grab the flask of wine My voice will need an oiling, to sing just one more time You recognise my harp; I always thought you would You recognise the patterns, graven on the wood In cloth are many treasures; you’ll see them one by one Do not be in a hurry; the day has scarce begun History repeats itself; or so the experts say Come and walk through history; time for us to play You live in peace and harmony; the Flame is burning bright Let us now return, to those days of murky light Calinor, the King, was an old and bitter man Rivals from the other states, encroaching on his land Burning villages lent smoke; that hung a dismal haze Scent of death was everywhere; every time of day Roland was the Princeling; but he was still a child Pretenders all around, and chaos running wild I was very lucky; for I became his page Thought he needed company, someone more his age Roland lived a courtly life, as princes always do No trials or tribulations, like for me and you You already know the heroes, battles that were fought Killing and the desperation, this long war had wrought History books are written; only by victors’ hands There always is another side, just so you understand It’s no time to discuss, who was right or wrong In a time of war, only death will sing his song Religion was a part, as religion always is I kill you in my Gods name; go to him in bliss Said they followed gods of peace; religions always do It must have been a different peace; one I never knew So people died for god, while others cursed his name If all followed his beliefs; it would not be the same Ruthless King was Calinor; a very brutal man Ruled only by the strength, measured in his hands Then again a kingdom, is measured by its King But still they have no right, to just do anything A people full of confidence, now full of despair A city filled with beauty, now shivering in fear So that’s the situation, as my sorry tale begins In this type of situation, nobody really wins Roland grew to manhood, a knight with shining lance I was just an archer, but bard when I’d the chance You heard the words, archer, bard, now you’ve realised The one that all, thought was dead, right before your eyes In the chest, down the side, there is a silver box Pass it here, hold your tongue, no matter what the cost Then sit and listen closely; I have a tale to tell You will then be keeper, and you must guard it well So now you know I’m Algorin, so hated for so long Bet you never thought that Algorin, was Keeper of the Song But this not about me, its of the Chrystal Flame Of love and hate and traitors, and how it got its name We must have been about fifteen, when first we went to war There is no need to recollect, the bloodshed and the gore Battles won and battles lost, death to fellow men Too exhausted to mount up; yet back we went again But heroes can be cowards; depends on those who write Traitors are always traitors; they never can be right King Calinor decided, that Roland should be wed Allies were needed in his fight, or he would soon be dead Highlanders were then approached, to send their princess down With Darienne, Princess Royal, sent into the town Roland was by then a man, scarred in many ways He did not fall for Darienne, but for her lovely maid Royal marriages are not for love; they always are a plan Allegiances and treaties are more important than Romance and the taste of love, two hearts joined as one Royal marriages for love; it simply isn’t done Love had come to Roland, so peace was on his mind A Highland treaty would give this, for a lasting time Who are we, mere mortals, to question what is right Peace would mean an end, to our bloody fights But Calinor did not want peace; it never was his plan From castle keep he ruled the war, that brought death to man ‘Tis why he wanted treaties, with the other tribes Great would be the slaughter, with them by his side You’ve all heard of the stories, of the battle knights On their steeds in armour; a truly awesome sight They really were invincible, like an ancient tank But this was not true, of the other ranks Peasants were the soldiers, and they gave their lives In a normal battle, not many would survive Smell of blood and screaming men, lingers in my ears In battle is an end, to all men’s hopes and fears Roland was a knight of knights; he wanted this to cease No matter what the final cost; he knew he wanted peace The Prince was very honourable, also very just For peace to marry Darienne, then marry her he must So the plans were done, for the wedding day Although he wanted peace, he also loved the maid In the castles hidden rooms darker plans were laid None knew the machinations, the King now put in play Came to me in dead of night, envoys of the King Telling me to go there, and for him to sing There among the Knights of Fear, I heard his evil plan Calinor may be King, yet still a wretched man Just after the wedding, when they made their vow From a leafy tree; I must strike the blow Darienne must die; assassins must be blamed Highlanders would fight, country back in flames As our world’s best archer, I must lend a hand Roland could never know, he would not understand The politics of power, are not for those like me My prince the only answer to our destiny If Darienne was dead, he could marry maid But what would happen to our land; I was sore afraid The wedding day was beautiful, when Roland took her hand Sky and air were chrystal clear, all over the land King then gave the signal, to put the plan in place Shoot an arrow in her heart; then leave without a trace I think that was the instant, I knew what I should do Raised my bow, asked my gods, to hold the arrow true ..... .... Then I stood, so all would know, who had shot the king Did my life now matter; No; it didn’t mean a thing Roland was in fury; his father lay there dead I was once a hero, now hunted for my head Loathed by everybody; Hated by my friend Somehow I survived, and never found an end My part of this story ends; I swear to god above Roland brought the world to peace, and filled it with his love His love of maid grew stronger, yet he maintained his vow And of her love for him; You will learn that now It was a few years later, when Darienne gave birth On the day the twins were born, her spirit left the Earth The maid was in despair, when the twins were born Wandered through the night, lost and so folorn She took her life to end, her unrequited love Roland heard the news, in the castle high above The legend says he died, for love of Darienne But now you know the truth, here the story ends You look on me with pure contempt, written in your eyes Yet you wanted truth, and none of this is lies Remember that the truth, is what you understand It has formed a legend; Love now fills our land In the chest before you, real truth is buried there One day perhaps it can be told, when there is no fear You are now the guardian; Keeper of the Song My time has come, I will go; Death only waits so long …… ….. …. … .. . 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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LongTe~ There is so much to like about this penning~ I am on my second read and will be back to find even more of it to my liking~ Wonderful ink !! *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
i printed your poem off before I read it, so I could savor it with my morning coffee. A wonderful tale of romance, valor, honor and treachery. I loved the cadence and I especially liked the line "History books are written by the victor's hand. There always is another side, just so you undestand." How trues. We never get both sides of the story. This is a piece that could have been written in the past, when poets were revered and you would have been among them. Good job. Joyce |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Thankyou both so much My style has been called archaic But thats cool by me The only poetry I remember Rhymes It just grew out a little thought about the truth of legends Then as it came together I had the chance to talk about so much more I was a bit scared of putting it in here Simply because the last Saga type poem was not really well recieved Thanks again .. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
longte: An eloquent write and glad you posted it here so we have a chance to enjoy it! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I am a fan of poetry that rhymes too. It is so much easier to memorize. Great job. Sorry if we were't receptive to your first one. Love, Joyce |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LongTe~ See ... I'm true to my promise ... back in for another breath of 'archiac'~ ![]() You will find that 'most' of us here in the Corner are 'rhymers' ... sometimes not, but poets just the same~ Your style is refreshing ... keep sharing, please~ Hey ... you send me the link or name of the 'other' saga ... and I'll be more than happy to take a read~ (as I know the others here will too) *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Hi The original one was called Prophecy Complete But it is very different to this one I have been writing for just on a year now I went back to the other saga and read it again This one is so much better that they cannot really be compared Yet when I wrote it I thought it was great So much for me thinking I was not changing as I write Peter Live It |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Peter, well done. If the other was not well recieved as you felt, it may have been just a slow day. Will go find it and read. good writitng here. martyjo |
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