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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2005-07-19 03:00 AM


Stroke

Moving in a haste,
Brushing next to skin
Keen marks land swaying
Eyes roll along in dreaming.

Then, pause for a change of steps,
Moving against friction- I warned you...ha ha
Brushing off against chin where it disappears- Edges!
Diluted shades smooth the heart.

Oh I love you, cuz you are a dance.

(c)July 18, 2005
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2005 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-07-19 11:00 AM


Eliza~
So nice to read you here~

Where, oh where, is your lovely picture ???

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2005-07-19 12:26 PM


Nice you come back to us.  Happy poem.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2005-07-19 01:38 PM


Hi Eliza:  Glad to see you are still writing and good to read your poem.

Betty Lou

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theinkquill
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4 posted 2005-07-21 08:42 PM


very nice

iq http://www.realitypoetry.com

jjote
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5 posted 2005-07-21 10:45 PM


enjoyed your dance...ballroom maybe?
*smile*

aries_luv_ppl
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6 posted 2005-07-22 07:36 PM


hi, thanks and Hi to all.

I am using dance as a metaphor of art and painting Cheers

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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