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Crimson Sea

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

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0 posted 2005-07-17 08:49 PM

Sinking in a crimson sea
everything a part of me
floating everywhere

knowing what I have to do
knowing what I should have done
knowing I will do
nothing else at all

I cower beneath
the ominous black sky
there is nowhere to go
but under the waves

but I bob along
for a bit longer
maybe I can hold onto something
something may come soon

or not

but I won’t sink just yet

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2005-07-17 11:17 PM

Very nice but I don't think there is any chance of your sinking. Love, Joyce

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

2 posted 2005-07-18 02:59 PM

I liked this one very much and know exactly how it feels to be so close to giving in to the dakness and yet still with that glimmer of sweet hope.... that beacon of light that just keeps us afloat

Nicely written
Hugs June x

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2005-07-21 10:47 PM

I feel a great show of spirit in this poem..with that I don't think you'll sink.
*S*

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-07-22 09:47 AM

LovieBug~

This is so uplifting and just plain downright gorgeous~

LOVE 'crimson' ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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