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Wobbly Head Bob
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0 posted 2005-05-05 08:13 PM



Behind my reflection lies
The mispent innocense of those eyes
Thoughts run escaping capture
Her skin displays that time has trapped her
A touch though so familiar
Won't displace the mystery that fills her
Perhaps with some time she'll show
Everything I was never meant to know

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Annie78
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here then there then back here
1 posted 2005-05-05 10:00 PM


WOW and WOW again
Annie

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pegasus111
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2 posted 2005-05-06 06:00 AM


there are more layers here than I can digest in one reading ( ok..  3 readings ) I will have to come back to this to gain a deeper understanding. BTW...thanks for your comment..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Tramp Poet
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3 posted 2005-05-06 04:30 PM


encapsulated like some pre-historic insect in amber, eh Bob?
nice capture of that which haunts...

"If you give a man a fire, he's warm for a night; if you set a man on fire, he's warm for the rest of his life."
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passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-05-07 07:05 PM


loved this!
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5 posted 2005-06-17 09:14 AM


Bob~
Nice word-wobble~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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