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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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0 posted 2005-04-25 12:03 PM



Last year was the year
The sky let loose it’s hail
Pounding with stinging pain upon
My sensitive skin
It beat on for what seemed an eternity of hours
The piercing coldness soon
Turned my being into a pillar of numbness

Not a ray of sunshine could I feel
Nor even a hopeful breeze
I lived a day to day existenence
Loving thoughts became a distant memory

You were still here when I told you my feelings of love for you had
Died out
I told you how miserable it felt to feel not even a slight fluttering of
My heart for you
You told me there’s just some people who can’t ever forgive
And I must be one of them

No I said it is not that I can not forgive
It is I cannot feel love
I still care about you
I don’t want you to leave
But I feel like we need to start all over again
You’re going to have to court me.

Hope I's not sharing too much, but maybe someone can relate.

© Copyright 2005 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2005-04-25 10:44 AM


I hope that ray of hope has broadened and
the storm has lessened.  love, Joyce

Annie78
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2 posted 2005-04-25 12:49 PM


oh me too songbird, i hope that your heart can feel again. i was at this very place not so very long ago, and will tell you it is wonderful to start fresh, be courted, and feel again. good luck to you my dear

Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-06-17 09:17 AM


Marcia~
I'm kind of skip-doodling through the Pub, familiarizing myself with some pennings I have missed~

Hope things are well in your corner of the world~

Poignant penning poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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