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Nights Song Haiku

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-07-26 11:38 AM

Sweet hushed zephyr song
Whistling through the ancient oaks
Evening lullaby

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-07-26 02:40 PM

This sounds quite peaceful. I really liked the last line. Very well written.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-07-26 05:12 PM

I love that first line~
So beautiful, Dennis, it's one of your best!

Melissa~

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-26-2001).]

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

3 posted 2001-07-26 06:18 PM

I like this very much.

Deb

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2001-07-27 07:46 AM

I love your Haikus
This one is lovely
Liz

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2001-07-27 05:21 PM

Gorgeous, Dennis!

Maree

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-07-27 06:33 PM

Wind song is always beautiful, when it's gentle, as it feels it must be in your lovely haiku.

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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7 posted 2001-07-27 07:16 PM

This is lovely, Dennis! Very lovely!

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

8 posted 2001-07-29 08:48 AM

Another excellent Haiku.
Thanks,

Melton

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2005-06-17 09:22 AM

Dennis~
Lovely ... just lovely~

When circumstances allow, please come back and *gift* us with another beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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