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Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2005-03-09 04:59 PM

thinking of Thee

songbirds singing
sky fluffy blue
overwhelmingly
standing, listen
stream bubbling
sunlight dancing
i’m thinking of Thee.

suddenly awake
darkened room
day or night
fully aware
heart racing
sheets dampened
i’m thinking of Thee.

song whispers
memories move
pictoral playing
sweetest kiss
forever evening
sighs then cries
i’m thinking of Thee.

~~~~~

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

1 posted 2005-03-09 07:08 PM

~Beautifully worded ~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-03-10 12:51 PM

Very, very nice. Enjoyed. Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

LadyDracaWolf
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 73
CA

3 posted 2005-03-10 01:43 PM

I happened to like it very much. It well written in my view.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

4 posted 2005-03-12 07:25 AM

don't understand why I felt so sad reading this.. its lovely, truly sweet! guess I was so touched by the emotions that shine through your poem..

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

5 posted 2005-03-15 06:59 AM

so many vivid images in so few words.. nice work my friend.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

6 posted 2005-04-18 01:09 PM

thank you all for the input...
thee three times is a loving reminder.

BeaSassy
Junior Member

since 2005-10-13

Posts 10
California

7 posted 2005-10-20 08:15 PM

The Most Beautiful Poem Ever Written!

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

8 posted 2005-11-06 11:07 PM

yes i thought this was the most beautiful poem ever written too as it was written for my birthday.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

9 posted 2005-11-07 05:54 PM

this is gorgeous. Lovely words and put together beautifully.
Hugs June xx

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