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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2005-07-18 01:47 PM


twinkle, twinkle

the breeze blows, flows
seductively, gentle caress
cools dampened skin.
sitting, quiet, dwelling
blue touching red umbrella
twinkle of lovely blue eyes.

talking of re-marriage
sorry, it's ok, smiles
hand in hand sweetness.
Picket fence and puppies
motor home and kittens
laughing, together is all.

Submitting to God
His way to be
our way...tis true.
Nothing else matters
we are finally His
kneeling before our King.

Gentle breeze, appreciated
we say our simple prayer
together we walk along.
Praising God, loving
hand in hand in Hand
twinkle of lovely blue eyes.

~~~~~~


© Copyright 2005 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Annie78
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1 posted 2005-07-18 02:22 PM


as always my love you take my breath away...tis a wonderful thing to be loved and to love and know that "DAD" will love us always. Thank you for everything...twinkle twinkle
Your Forever Bride
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

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2 posted 2005-07-18 02:36 PM


I'm simply delighted.  Handle with care.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2005-07-18 11:32 PM


Your happiness makes all of us happy too!

Betty Lou

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4 posted 2005-07-20 10:15 AM


Daniel~
Good ... so good to see you~

'Submitting to God
His way to be
our way...tis true.
Nothing else matters
we are finally His
kneeling before our King.'


Yes ... yes~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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jjote
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5 posted 2005-07-21 02:55 AM


"Gentle breeze, appreciated
we say our simple prayer
together we walk along.
Praising God, loving
hand in hand in Hand
twinkle of lovely blue eyes"

This last stanza is simply an act of absolute faith in our Creator. so touching.

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6 posted 2005-07-21 06:32 PM


Your faith in the Lord is beautifully depicted in this piece. I enjoyed this very much. I wish you two happiness!

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

Annie78
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7 posted 2005-11-07 04:34 PM


oh how i wish i could still believe this...this makes my heart hurt all over again
Annie

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