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Beasley
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Cheboygan,MI USA

0 posted 2005-02-19 03:42 PM



Sand Castles

If grains of sand
Where shards of gold
I’d build a castle
That could hold
Abundant faith
And fruit of spirit
And everyone
Who came near it
Would go away
In a state of grace
With a godly smile
And glowing face.


© Copyright 2005 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2005-02-19 07:19 PM


How sweet.  Nice to see you oosting again.  Love, Joyce
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2005-02-19 07:46 PM


Dear Barb:  This is a lovely thought! So nice to see something from you today!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Beasley
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3 posted 2005-02-20 03:12 PM


Joyce, If I am going to oost with anybody, I can't think of anybody I would rather oost with then you.
Love, Barb (hey isn't ooster at the end of this month?)

Beasley
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4 posted 2005-02-20 03:13 PM


Thanks Betty Lou,
I love being here and reading you guys. I have been so busy and so involved, but I always love to get back here.
Barb

jjote
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5 posted 2005-02-25 07:48 PM


I love the images in your poem - esp. the "shards of gold" one.
Isobel
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6 posted 2005-02-26 04:28 AM


Dear Barb

I really liked this poem of yours!

Love Isobel


Enchantress
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7 posted 2005-02-26 02:43 PM


This is truly lovely.
Thank you for sharing.
Hugs~Nancy

~ The most beautiful poem ever written..
    was written by you in my heart ~

midnightblues
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8 posted 2005-02-27 04:00 AM


Awww Barb,

what a smiley poem!!
thanks for sharing!

Love
MiCheLLe

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juliet_2u
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9 posted 2005-02-27 10:33 AM


Very lovely
Jules

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10 posted 2005-02-27 12:43 PM


Barb~
Oh my gosh ... how beautiful is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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