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juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina

0 posted 2002-12-18 06:32 PM


Dear Lost Love,

It is late here
And all is quiet
But for the chimes outside my window
Dancing in the dark
I watch the flickering of a candle
It keeps the room aglow
Through the blinds I see the moon
It too is all alone
But shines so very bright
I have wrapped some gifts for you
Yes I know we're no longer one
But these are some things
I really wanted you to have
Little treasures to possess
To call your very own
At the end of the couch
Sits a beautiful big box
It's covered in shiny paper
Wrapped with a scarlet silk bow
Inside this box is the hope of new love
Something I trust you'll find
As time goes on
Standing by itself in the corner
Is a box full of joy
I could barely close the lid
And I pray it overtakes you
Please let it foerver flow
Sitting on my lap
Is a very delicate box
It is filled with something special
I give this gift to you
But only you can embrace it
This is a gift that shall never stop giving
It is the gift of happiness
I give to you
Throw away the guilt now
Let it all go
Say goodbye to pain and sorrow
For I know your heart
Aches as badly as my own
But I want to think of you
Smiling and happy again
I want to know you've carried on
So please accept these gifts
For they're now all I have to give
Remember the heart from
Which they came
With candle in hand now
I shall whisper farewell lost love
As I quietly blow out the flame.



[This message has been edited by Enchantress (12-20-2002 11:21 PM).]

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-12-18 11:09 PM


This is so special...so beautiful...
the gifts so pure and loving.
Such a tender, yet sad write.
Be well...be happy.
You will love again also.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2002-12-19 07:14 AM


I am speechless. the love burns the page. be well gentle lady.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2002-12-19 07:40 PM


Such loving, priceless gifts you offer.  Lovely.  Joyce
juliet_2u
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North Carolina
4 posted 2002-12-21 11:29 AM


Nancy, my words for him could never compare to his tenderness and yes I'm sure that God will grant me that special gift of love again one day.

Pegasus, speaking of speechless, that's how your reply left me. Thank you so much for your precious words.

Joyce, what a kind heart you have, thank you for your sweet words.

Thank you all so very much.
Hugs,
Juls

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
5 posted 2002-12-26 04:49 AM


Dear Juls,

you are truly blessed with the power of immaculate love.

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2005-02-27 01:00 PM


Juliet~

Jules, this piece reads like a dream~
How very, very lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2005-02-27 08:44 PM


Sovery lovely from a gentle heart.  Joyce
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