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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2004-11-06 03:56 PM



These pearly whites took a bite
of my creamy chocolate birthday cake
I didn’t have to bake (that was good)
and totally understood
that 5 minutes on the lips
might very well be
5 pounds on the hips
but I didn’t care
so I took a dare
and
ate
the
whole
thang…
Not really, but I thought about it!
It was oh so good…

© Copyright 2004 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
myheart
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1 posted 2004-11-06 05:28 PM


this is "sweet" and I have often felt the same way.
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2 posted 2004-11-06 09:25 PM


BloomingRose:  Happy birthday!  Chocolate cake is my all time favorite!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2004-11-06 09:40 PM


AND A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU DEBRA!
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4 posted 2004-11-07 01:03 AM


Glad you enjoyed your cake and I hope the rest of your birthday was just as good.  Love, Joyce
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5 posted 2004-11-07 01:32 AM


HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEBRA!!!
I'm glad that you had a great day!

~Alli~

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6 posted 2004-11-07 08:35 AM


BloomingRose~
My friend ... another year serves you well~
I just love your birthday cake ...
can't you tell ?
Did you save me a slice ...
or will we have to bake one twice ?
Well ... this is getting sticky sweet
so let's just hurry up and eat !!!

You are a doll~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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BloomingRose
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7 posted 2004-11-08 08:47 AM


leave it to Marge to come up with a really sweet reply that rhymes!
Thanks again to everyone. I had a great weekend!

TexUS
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8 posted 2004-11-14 10:36 PM


Birthday cakes are absolutely calorie free!  

It is the one day of the year YOU CAN HAVE YOUR CAKE and...well, you know the rest!

Happy belated Birthday!

Enjoyed the poem

Broken_Winged_Angel
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9 posted 2004-11-15 08:54 AM


Happy Birthday

The cake sounds delicious!


midnightblues
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10 posted 2004-11-16 05:12 AM


HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR DEBRA!!!
yup chocolate cakes are the nicest things on earth yumyum

Love
MiCheLLe

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