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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Promise? She sits next two singing along so sweet slow, special love song. Looks over, touches smiles with twinkles pauses just to say, “I love you baby... more than chocolate more than blue skies more than cold spring water.” “I love you more than; I ever thought possible more than ever imagined more than I can describe... you make me complete, my love...” He is overwhelmed tears sting to eye sharing with his bride Looks over, touches smiles with twinkles pauses just to say, “I love you, my baby more than popcorn cooking more than cool, spring morn more than my motorcycle. I choose you over buddies hunting, fishing, guy stuff You are my best friend come here, my bride let me whisper secretly... We sit together sharing sweet, sweet love song touching, caring, loving together. Sharing a moment sealed in time a memory made of forever our lips meet with promise. ~~~~~  |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
My own special tramp you have done it again and left me breathless, as you do everytime. Love you, Annie |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Dan, This is the side of you, that I love so much. Beautiful and sweet. Love and Hugz... Shawna |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
This is a beautiful love song. Hugs June x |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Awsum write,,,,great feelings michelle To be held, is all I ask...... |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Daniel, What a beautiful poem about your love. May you both be blessed with years of happiness. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
yeah well... too bad she didn't truly mean any of it. turns out was all just a cruel game. Soon as she got some cash...ran off to Oregon this time. I will never understand how someone can say these things and not feel them inside. Or worse how stupid me can't tell the difference. guess there won't be any love poems from me for awhile... tramp |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
she meant every word said and came home to you, who ran this time and who has no love to write about only thing is my faith is that you will come home and we can finish the chapters of running your bride |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
It is a very beautiful poem. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow this is such a sweetie!!  Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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