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junemac
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0 posted 2004-08-12 03:34 AM



Dreams laid on cotton
Secrets nestled in feathers
Night-- silent witness

© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-08-12 12:05 PM


Tender thoughts in haiku form.  Nicely done.  Joyce
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2 posted 2004-08-12 11:22 PM


june:  I really like this!  Good job.

Love
Betty Lou

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PatAngel
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3 posted 2004-08-13 12:55 PM


Very well done June! I really enjoyed the Haiku.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

junemac
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4 posted 2004-08-13 12:52 PM


Aw thanks Joyce, betty lou and Pat. I try the odd haiku as I love this form.
Hugs June x

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