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Snow (haiku)

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2004-08-02 04:34 PM

Powdering down on earth
Icing mountain and valley
Sparkling crust of white

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

1 posted 2004-08-02 10:00 PM

Sure would be nice, feeling icy weather here. Did I ever mention that one of my long-time customers turned me on to poetry a few years ago? The very first book I recieved was a book of Haiku called the "Sound of Water," Haiku by Basho, Buson, Issa and others. My all-time favorite is Rumi.

Your Haiku was well written.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

2 posted 2004-08-09 02:09 PM

the veil of gray sky
the draping surrounding pines
angels in crisp air

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

3 posted 2004-08-09 04:29 PM

thanks Patangel. I love haiku too. I am just beginning to read and attempt to write them lol.
Hugs June x

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

4 posted 2004-08-09 04:32 PM

Eagle scorpion.
That is so beautiful and delicate.
thank you.
June x

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