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"I saw you" |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I saw you I know I saw you. and you looked away from me. I wanted I wanted your love but you couldn't give me it. You hurt me but I hurt you too, Maybe I deserve much worse. I love you I really love you But you drove away from me I needed Needed your forgivenes but there was none to receive. I hoped for Hoped for your return but you never did return You left me you left me behind To chase and scream behind you I'm sorry Sorry for chaos: But I'm not sorry for me. Juju- |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is sad and well written and shows a lot of pain. I loved the last line of this poem. very powerful !! hugs June x |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Juju, Such a heart-felt sad poem! It really touched me. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Nice write Keep it up Eliza Simmons |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you guys! This was a hard one for me to write, because its tough. Juju |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
wow...this mad eme cry as i read it, becuse i am going through the same thing. He is moving over this weekend, and a couple weeks ago, we both hurt each other really bad, and it hasnt been the same since. I cry almost every night. This was an amazing write. Cant wait to read more. KArissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
As I read this, I felt like I was about to cry... I can't really say that I'm going through what you are, but I know it must really be horrible... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this aches deeply |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
s0pme one does care about my poem! juju |
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