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Honeybee
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0 posted 2004-06-20 09:57 PM


Mate of The Soul

We’ve never met
and yet, I know your heart,
the length, the depth and the heighth of it.
For, I know that you exist
as sure as I taste my own breath.

You are the mate my soul has reached for
in search of beautiful bond
in all it’s strong fragility.
You are my déjà vu
of one heart and spirit
falling into the sky.

We are earth and universe
of bodies bound in wake
soaring as eagles exhaled
through the wind’s fingers.

In mesh I wear your flesh
of kismet gown profound,
a familiar unknown
through the mapping of your soul.
You write of simplicities and intricacies
in perfect rhyme with mine
spreading it’s spill of quill
upon skin pages;
And I shall drink of your ink
in cadence of friend and kindred
into a sigh’s vastness
of love’s meter and flow.

Memories crash like waves,
their shores awash over contours
effervescence echoed synchronicity
woven in the tapestry of us.
You are my cup of life
in which I sip
of a hundred vows before
where you and I sailed
through passion overfloweth
into the cream of dreams come true.

Though grains of sand may trickle time
our tide is fated, destined.
Let the stars stand as witness
we are genesis of touch
let my goddess fill your air with supple
so you shall drown in my eyes
in the soft of my sea
we are all-encompassing, infinite.

Reason never questions why
and karma never explains,
for, this is God’s plan
it’s not in our hands.

By Melissa Long-Monette




True love knows not of race or time,
a choice it is of fate divine.




Love is poetry of the heart,
a destined, sacred work of art.


*A re-write of an oldie...


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-19-2004 11:30 AM).]

© Copyright 2004 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-06-21 02:17 AM


This is a truly beautiful love poem.  Joyce
junemac
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2 posted 2004-06-21 04:07 PM


A very beautiful poem. I love the images you chose too.
Hugs from June x

Broken_Winged_Angel
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3 posted 2004-06-23 07:53 PM


I knew someone like that once... It seems we've got to wait for another life to meet again though.

Beautiful poem and images.

BWA

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-07-19 11:30 AM


VERY nice, Melybee....
Honeybee
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5 posted 2004-07-19 11:34 AM



Thank you to all who replied....it always mean a lot to have your support.  This is probably one of my favourite 'soulmate' poems.
And of course, thank you to Karilea for editing my poem and for the bonus reply

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

PatAngel
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6 posted 2004-07-19 11:59 AM


Honeybee,

The images are just as beautiful as your love poem. I enjoyed every word of it!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-07-19 06:02 PM


Very beautiful Melissa.
I enjoyed this completely.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

PKreturns
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8 posted 2004-07-20 08:42 AM


Man, this is beautiful writing...whew.
MGROVES
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9 posted 2004-08-23 09:52 PM


glad i stopped in
this is beautiful
may your heart fly free
with your spirits wings
to the song of love
your soul sings      


Larry C
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10 posted 2004-09-23 10:49 PM


Melissa,
Well it has been a long time since I've gotten to fawn all over your writing. How I missed it. Fabulous dear girl. When he shows up I hope you introduce me! If no one else will tell you, I will: You don't write enough.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2004-09-28 08:31 AM


Melissa, this is stunning work.
SO VERY good to read you again.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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