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PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-07-23 01:13 PM

I still hear the echoing of your voice
As you said my name, the ringing in my ears
Became moments in time that
I can still recall after all these years

Life is strange and full of change
I can’t remember yesterday, yet there you are
Little things I had thought were lost
Come back to me at unsuspecting times
Little things remembered, then again lost
So it seems except in dreams,
Nighttime recurring visions of restless doubt
The healing process comes after the pain
Wounds run deeper than at first thought
And I lean on the past like a walking cane
But the past is slipping fast

I can still taste the warmth of your tears
Though it’s no longer love, it’s something;
Something to hold onto in the night
Nights like this when there’s nothing
Nothing sometimes means everything

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-07-23 09:17 PM

PK~
Oh, just tear my heart out~

Goodness gracious ... I could ring the tears out of this one~

You have the word touch that says so much~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2004-07-23 11:18 PM

Yes this broght tears but there was more. When love leaves the memory of it lingers for comfort. Joyce

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

3 posted 2004-07-24 01:04 AM

PK~

Such deep emotion brought tears to my eyes! The poem felt as if it could have been written about my long lost love. Even now the memory lingers on after so many years.

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-07-25 12:57 PM

I like this...because of its sadness

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2004-07-25 06:59 PM

Ohhhh I love your writing. so very sad but you get me every time with those words of yours.
Hugs June x

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