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PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-07-14 01:09 PM

I’m haunted by her
Whispered words,
Her hair, her face
She’s a shadow from
The darkness,
A lady born of mystery
With a look and
Twist of a slender wrist,
I am mesmerized
Within her soul
Can’t you hear her now
She calls to us all
Upon a barren ledge,
Overlooking the endless sea
I am not the only one
Who has come this way
And I know that,
I am not the last
To look upon
Those colorless eyes,
And into a heart that knows not
The consequences of
Emotional greed
To satisfy the tell-tale
Signs of humanity
In decline
I, in almost all certainty,
Should have recognized
All the warnings
Before I stopped
To listen to her song
Now, finally,
I think I am in love

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-07-14 01:53 PM

you make all so spooky......

well done

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

2 posted 2004-07-15 03:37 AM

I like how this is nothing like an ordinary love poem. It's a nice change. I love the line "she's a shadow from the darkness."
Nicely done!
-Peaceful

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

3 posted 2004-07-15 11:22 AM

Dear PK~

I have to agree with Peaceful_Dreamer. This is an a different type of love poem. I found it quite unique. Great job PK!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2004-07-15 01:25 PM

Thank you all. I love the comments about being a different type of love poem. Sad but true.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-07-15 02:04 PM

PK, this was stunning, and I to agree with those above me, it's different, mysterious...yet captures the heart...

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

6 posted 2004-07-15 04:32 PM

Thank you LeeJ...

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2004-07-15 05:11 PM

PKreturns: Very well done!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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