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PKreturns
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0 posted 2004-07-16 01:51 PM


She glided across the room
As if the wind itself propelled her,
A smile lit up the room
And his darkness went away
Those delicate hands moved through air
Spinning a tale of happiness
And he continued to watch her
Yet, she never noticed him
Indecision clouded his better judgment
Memories flooded through emptiness,
He remembered the sound of her laugh
And the way she played with her hair
While smiling at him
And touching him with soft, brown eyes
They seemed to caress him
And the world slipped away
Her nearness now made him sweat
And he choked upon his heart
Did she forget him since she left?
Did she miss him at all?
All of his life, chasing a dream
She left, and made him awaken
Now, as he walked out the door
Their eyes met in a frozen heat
A pause in the fabric of time,
And that once familiar smileā€¦..


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SEA
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1 posted 2004-07-16 04:43 PM


CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!
(or are you trying to kill me here?!)

wow, you pulled me right in with this, now continue your story!

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2 posted 2004-07-16 04:46 PM


PK~
The phrase to *sigh* for ...

'A pause in the fabric of time'



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-07-16 04:54 PM


Thank you SEA, but that's just it. That's how it did end, just like that...

Thanks Marge...your words warm me.

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4 posted 2004-07-16 06:33 PM


no.....I am guessing there is much more to the story....but ok....I liked it either way
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