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Purple Poet On Wheels
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0 posted 2004-07-12 03:17 PM


I wander down the sidewalk with
Jim and Heidi
My new literary friends
Who have come to town
For reasons that have not been fully explained
We find ourselves in a store
Transplanting the third world into the first

In the rear of the store
Heidi found two red plastic eggs
Nestled in a wicker basket
She presents half of the pair to me
And proclaims it to be
The Love Egg

In doing so,
Heidi has infused it with
The luck that I need
To finally fall into someone’s arms

Like a fly into a Venus flytrap

Vote Kerry/Edwards

© Copyright 2004 Michael J. Haider - All Rights Reserved
Purple Poet On Wheels
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1 posted 2004-07-12 03:20 PM


Man, I like this one

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2 posted 2004-07-12 03:24 PM


I hope you have a soft and welcomed fall.  Love, Joyce
Purple Poet On Wheels
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3 posted 2004-07-12 03:48 PM


Thank you very much
junemac
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4 posted 2004-07-12 04:32 PM


A very clever and original write. I very much like your style and the story in this one.#
Hugs from June x

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
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5 posted 2004-07-12 08:23 PM


Wonderful poem! I enjoyed it very much.

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Purple Poet On Wheels
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6 posted 2004-07-15 01:19 PM


Hey eor, where are you?  I want you to read this.

Vote Kerry/Edwards

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