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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Stepping Back I have stopped and turned My thoughts have been round Through days or tremors and pain Care I, do I, should I abstain What hope there is in tears Defying the sombre morning chills Positioning memoirs on canvas I dare No not I, nor I, but not fallen still My grip on reality jostles all The inner spirit of a soul Once dimming, now living Confront me now, my past being Reel back the play Tear away at my heart you may I see a candlelight in thy darkness And my gratitude rejoices Time is my friend, ain't not What do you see ahead of you That I cannot see I have survived and I am real Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
beautifully penned my friend. Hugs june xxx |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Daniel, I enjoyed this very much. A wonderfully written poem. Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What hope there is in tears Defying the sombre morning chills Positioning memoirs on canvas I dare No not I, nor I, but not fallen still My grip on reality jostles all The inner spirit of a soul Once dimming, now living Confront me now, my past being Daniel, I am glad I have went looking through a few of the other forums, it is so very good to read you again. I really liked the entire piece, but the above lines tie it up nicely for me. very well done friend.. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great write, Daniel! Very deep and thoughtful penning! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ Firstly ... it's so good to see you~ Nextly ... 'What hope there is in tears Defying the sombre morning chills Positioning memoirs on canvas I dare' PRICELESS, and I dare say ... you do it so well~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
I admire your spirit. Enjoyed this very much. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Happy to find you here with your great poetry. Joyce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done |
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