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msflame
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0 posted 2004-08-26 11:39 AM


Where can I read your last thought?
In the moon garden away from the terrace,
miles from the promenade of ardent winds
        who compliment your ghost, my trance.

I’ll pull you through another storm
as wildness and sweet tongues
        curl in parched favor one with the other.

Cover me in mandarin cloths
and leave your scent.
Let me unwrap you once again
before we are silver and pale.
        The night is brass; let go, let go.

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1 posted 2004-08-26 12:35 PM


Very pretty and poetic.  Welcome to our corner.  Joyce
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2 posted 2004-08-27 12:30 PM


good one
msflame
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3 posted 2004-08-27 03:59 PM


Thanks both for your time and comments
PatAngel
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4 posted 2004-08-28 12:41 PM


Very enjoyable read!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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