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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is a poem for my collection of poemsabout the sky. The title refers to the mood of the sky on a particular evening. The sky is in a motherly mood Just before dusk lays its ebony veil Is an incredible beauty you can almost inhale Rich warm air settles sweetly in calm watering earth in its whispering balm Trees silhouetted on an fiery sky A black lace salute to day gone by Soft gauzy clouds weave purple streaks In magnificent backdrop to mountain peaks an invisible beat of night music occurs As humanity quietens and wilderness stirs Scent of darkness in the hour before night rises up from the rivers, blending in twilight The sky holds her arms out offering embrace A promise for tomorrow of peace and grace |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Trees silhouetted on an fiery sky A black lace salute to day gone by Loved this June...the words evoke so many feelings. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is lovely June. I hope this goes through. I have been refused a couple of time. Love, Joyce |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
June, This is a very beautiful poem. Thank you so much for sharing. Dawn |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear June, This is such a lovely poem. I enjoyed it very much. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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peaceful_dreamer Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 159SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW |
very strong imagry - and very beautifully written. I can see the sky you are describing... -Peaceful "I'm just me, trapped in a body." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful...I will be on the look out for more of this collection |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Utterly beautiful. perfect images. Maggie |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Thank you all so much for your encoragement and lovely comments about my poem.I will post more as my collection grows. Hugs from June x |
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