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A Spider - Haiku |
PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
A Spider - Haiku A tiny spider hidden under the bookcase Spins silvery web. Wriggling and twisting the moth tries to free itself The web holding fast. On this summer night I take a broom in my hand Sweep cobwebs away. Gone is the spider along with it the moth No insect cries. 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
what a beatiful haiku and a very fascinating subject. I loved that last line of this one most of all. Hugs June x |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is great! Love, Barb |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Thank you June and Barb! I've never written a Haiku before, so I thought I would share a couple of them I had written just recently. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
If they're not on the broom and you don't see 'em soon better check other places! lol now that i got ya squirming and checking... thanks for the "slice o' life" dear Pat! beware stow-a-ways... daniel |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
The kitties bring me presents they bring them all the time. They say they're not too tasty i say, "add a little lime..." I agree with Tramp Poet check for hitchers real soon don't put away that broom! Thanks Pat, i needed that this morning, Gonna get my own broom out and check it! I'll keep you posted if things jump at me... love (scratch, scratch) Annie |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Daniel, If you hear a scream know I jumped on my table More critters around. Lol! Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
Great ending Vote Kerry/Edwards |
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