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Look For Wonders |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Look For Wonders Have you seen a comet fly Or watched a star fall from the sky? It always fills me with delight. As though I'm privy to a sight Reserved for special moments when The cosmic forces meet and then, Something happens that is rare, For anyone who's looking there. Aurora Borealis meets Criteria for just such feats And geysers gushing from the ground, To overwhelm with sight and sound. Have you seen a breaching whale And watched it splash it's mighty tail? It's power and it's mystery, One of the secrets of the sea. Our channeled lives, like rivers bent On reaching oceans, mostly spent On mundane activities, Blessed with spectacles like these. So every day, I try to be Aware of life's perfidity, But look for wonders as I pass And four-leaf-clover in the grass! Betty Lou Hebert Published by Drury's Publishing in "Best Writer's of 1996" [This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 08-31-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good Betty Lou! If we're not looking for the right things we'll miss them, that's for sure. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I haven't seen many of the things you mention, but you do remind me to be sure to take notice of all the little things I see. Thanks for the reminder, and great poetry. Tracey |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Betty you really do have a zest for living. You seem to find all the wonders of this life. This is beautiful. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 09-01-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ I just love the rhythm to your verse~ Wonderfully done~ 'Have you seen a breaching whale And watched it splash it's mighty tail? It's power and it's mystery, One of the secrets of the sea.' And ... this IS a sight I've seen~ Majestic, with a beauty all it's own. Each day life gives us so many things to take notice of~ Thank you for sharing~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
Simply Maaaaavelous!!! Dahling!! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise and Tracey: Thank you both for your nice comments. I appreciate them. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: Thank you for reading and for your nice comments. I do find much to wonder at and marvel too, in daily life. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Thanks for all your encouragement! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Inanothertime: Thank you! (are you really Billy Crystal incognito??) Betty Lou Hebert |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Betty; The wonder and majesty is so alive in this grand poem! I too am grateful for the gift of a child's wonder in the great and small gifts of each moment! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Always take time to smell the flowers : ) Beautiful! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
ellie: Thank you so much for your nice comments. There is so much to marvel at isn't there? Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thank you Zinsser. Betty Lou Hebert |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Trillium... I was just telling my children when we were walking through the woods this weekend how often people fail to stop and listen and see all the wonderful sights and sounds around them.....I think I'll share this with them. Ranea |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Ranea: Thank you very much for your nice comments and I would be so pleased to have you share my poem with your children. Betty Lou Hebert |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I enjoy your thoughts and wonders. Wonder-full read. Melton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The rhythm the flow the wondrous glow of words cascading down the page enveloping my thoughts re-enforcing my dreams thanks Trillium! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: Thanks! Midnitesun: I enjoyed your poem! Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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