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0 posted 2001-05-18 12:02 PM


Dedicated to Marge Tindal
My mother held me in her arms all night,
To keep me warm and shield me from my fright.
The soldiers all around us seem so cruel
And we are helpless underneath their rule.
They forced us from our homes without a thing.
No clothes or food, nor blanket, could we bring.
Now every day we walk, while they all ride.
They hope to grind us down and break our pride.
But we are Cherokee!  Though we meet death,
We believe in who we are with our last breath.

We wonder if this trail will someday end
And if our broken hearts will ever mend.
But meantime, we leave graves along the way,
Though never given time to stop and pray.
Yet they will be remembered, one and all
And in our minds, we mark just where they fall.
So someday, when this time of tears is done
And we are finally free beneath the sun,
We'll mark each spot with monuments to show
What happened, so the world will always know!

Betty Lou Hebert

© Copyright 2001 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-18 02:17 AM


This is well done and heart breaking.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-05-18 08:22 PM


BettyLou~
Your movement into the circle of Cherokee history,
fills my heart with gladness.

You are embraced ... by the spirits and by this heart.

Your awareness is of magnitude ...
and your kindness of good heart.
I so appreciate you.
~*Willow White Feather*~

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3 posted 2001-05-19 07:21 PM


Dear Marge:  Thank you for finding this poem and for your wonderful comments.  The more I learn about the Cherokee, the more I want to know. Your Cherokee name is so lovely!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2004-11-15 11:46 AM


I was combing through the back pages and stumbled across this.  I hope you don't mind the bumping it up, but I think it's wonderful

BWA

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5 posted 2004-11-16 09:52 AM


I for one am glad you 'bumped' it - lovely piece.
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6 posted 2004-11-17 09:32 AM


what a wonderful tribute to a friend & a race......bless you
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7 posted 2004-11-22 10:23 PM


BWA:  I don't mind the bump at all and in fact, I'm glad to see this again. Thanks!

Love
Betty Lou

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8 posted 2004-11-22 10:25 PM


SPIRIT:

Thanks so much for commenting. Nice hearing from you.

Betty Lou

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9 posted 2004-11-22 10:25 PM


pegasus:  It's lovely to hear from you. I've missed your work and your comments.

Betty Lou

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10 posted 2005-01-05 08:07 AM


Dear Betty Lou

A lovely dedication to Marge Tindal.  A wonderful verse.

Love Isobel ox


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11 posted 2005-01-05 09:27 PM


Dear Isobel:  Surprised to see you here as I know you've been having problems getting in.  Nice surprise I might say!  Thanks for your comments.

Love
Betty Lou

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12 posted 2005-01-05 11:08 PM


Wonderful write Betty Lou - much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

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13 posted 2005-01-06 03:49 AM


Thanks Chris.  Nice to hear from you,

Betty Lou

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14 posted 2005-01-08 01:45 PM


how touching
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15 posted 2005-03-09 12:24 PM


Very well thought out and very unique. If I am not mistaken, this is along the Cherokee's "Trail of Tears" when they were forced from their homelands about 100 or more years ago.

Good work, and I hope to see more.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
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16 posted 2005-03-09 01:32 PM


passing shadows:  Wow, this is an old one!
Nice to see it again and thanks so much for your remarks.

Love
Betty Lou

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17 posted 2005-03-09 01:34 PM


LadyD.  Thanks for reading and commenting. You are right about the locale for this piece. A trafic time in our history. Hope you are enjoying the site.

Betty Lou

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18 posted 2005-03-12 07:12 AM


Dear Betty,

I like poems that tell a story, and yours tell a true story indeed.. very touching!

Love
MiCheLLe

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19 posted 2005-03-12 01:39 PM


Dear MiCheLLe:  Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed this story, sad as it is!

Love
Betty Lou

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20 posted 2005-04-10 08:43 PM


and it gets bumped up again, as i was in hospital during alot of the postings here and am just now getting caught up on my reading. this is beautiful, stirs the cherokee that mingles with the irish in my blood as well. lovely lovely piece.
annie

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21 posted 2005-04-10 09:38 PM


Dear Annie:  Thanks for reading this older poem.  I'm glad it "spoke" to you! Sorry to hear you were in the hospital.

Love
Betty Lou

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