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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Be My Valentine Like the most beautiful of rare, sweetly fragrant buttercup veined with innocence. Her love is pure, complete spilling over, filling mine they pool...making anew. Hearts entwined, joined as dreams of her possess loving her since yesteryear. A fleeting of glimpse, a tease she slips into my world then laughing...hides away. Dreaming of her playfulness her eyes, lips, warm embrace years of desire, filling my soul. Searching the hell of hours climbing mountains of time looking for...my one true. Writing for her, unknown my rose behind the waterfall her heavenly captures my heart. Gifting with my all, everything all that is, or hope to be...hers my darling, oh my buttercup... you are my dreams. ~~~~~~~~~  |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
Very well done good gentlemen... I am only a beginner but I thank your poem is perfect, flowing beautifully like a river. I do hope to enjoy more of your work in the coming days. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
loved it, your heartfilled words replaced another piece of my broke heart i truly thankyou just knowing that there are hearts that are true and humanity still lives amungst us, gives my soul great joy and peace thank you marcia |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely done. Enjoyed. Chris  "At one glance |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Really enjoyed this...excellent work! Grover. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A beautiful love poem, worthy of this Valentine's Day. Joyce |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
so lovely...beautiful words so well played..and from the heart..Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! God Bless You, dearest friend, this is a most beautiful Valentine gift that will glow eternally 365 days a year, may your love always be a crystal rose of the waterfall, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Awwww Writing for her, unknown my rose behind the waterfall her heavenly captures my heart. Gifting with my all, everything all that is, or hope to be...hers my darling, oh my buttercup... you are my dreams. sweet  Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
thank you for this...i found this and can't imagine why i didn't comment on it then. forgive me for my selfishness in those past days my once upon a time too. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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