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Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2004-06-23 07:24 PM



Things were looking down
Dreams were shattering
Broken glass all around
Twilight had crept in

All this without a sound
Some expected, but mostly not
Walking around, head bowed
Life was getting hard again

No reason to hold on
No hope, no more dreams
Step after step, plodding
But nothings as it seems

Midnight talks about nothing
And a friendship was formed
Again the sun rises
Another seedling of hope born

As it always happens, when things were getting rather unbearable...a special guy stumbled across my path in life.. or me across his. At any rate, thanks go out to Mr. Good Mood Man and the smiles he's brought lately.  

Thanks for being yourself babe.

Your time is here. Take one last look at it, then never come back. This part of your life is already over...

© Copyright 2004 Angel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-06-28 04:28 PM


Good luck with your new friendship.  Joyce
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2004-06-29 01:36 PM


Nice to hear that things are looking better for you!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
3 posted 2004-06-30 04:14 AM


this is so lovely and very similar to a poem I wrote a while back calles "For You"
I will try and post it today so you may see the similarities.
There is nothing quite like the love of a friend when you are at your lowest point.
I am so thrilled for you.Your poem lightens the readers heart.

Hugs from June x

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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Singapore
4 posted 2004-07-01 12:19 PM


oooh i really like this! very sweet very sincere

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Michelle_loves_Mike
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Pennsylvania
5 posted 2004-07-01 01:52 PM


I LOVE THIS!!! SENDING IT TO MY BESTEST FRIEND,,RINGO,,,HES ALWAYS THERE FOR ME,,

mICHELLE

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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