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Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2004-06-30 04:29 PM

Walls built up
Months numbed in pain
Years forgotten
You whispered my name

Something stirs
Long lost in the cold
Flame flickers slowly
Forgotten in days of old

Yet the sun remembers
Relights that life
Of a forgotten seedling
Lost in a winter of strife

With some nourishment
Gentle loving care
Pulling of those weeds
In a soft springs air

You brought me to life
A smiles in place
Uncertain sometimes, yes
Only support shows on your face

So I grow slowly
Reaching for a steadying hand
Only when the terrance
Grows a little uneven

Ever there with nourishment
Fertilizer for the heart
Kindness, understanding
This flowers ready for a new start.

I've decided, while I might write semi decent things once in awhile again... I'm still completely hopeless when it comes to naming things I've written. I'm starting to get back into the "hang" of writing what I'm feeling.. but to put a name to it? I'm back in a rut If you've got a better title, please share it.

Thankyou,
BWA

Your time is here. Take one last look at it, then never come back. This part of your life is already over...

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

1 posted 2004-06-30 04:42 PM

How about...Butterfly on a Wheel

?

P.S. I liked it.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2004-07-01 12:41 PM

Wow I like this! makes me feel warm and fuzzy with love

heh im not too good with titles too.. but i would juz name it as 'YOU' .. err its not very good is it =( heheh anywayz great poem! its going into my collection yay!

thanks for sharing dear

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2004-07-01 12:41 PM

Wow I like this! makes me feel warm and fuzzy with love

heh im not too good with titles too.. but i would juz name it as 'YOU' .. err its not very good is it =( heheh anywayz great poem! its going into my collection yay!

thanks for sharing dear

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-07-01 01:44 PM

YOUR WORK HITS HOME WITH ME,,,,I FELT BROUGHT BACK WHEN I MET MY MIKE,,,,
MICHELLE

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2004-07-01 02:55 PM

so very much emotion. wonderful poem.
I adored this one. thanks for sharing
Hugs June x

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2004-07-01 06:12 PM

Lovely and the name works for me. Love, Joyce

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